“Warfare provides people with a semblance of psychological positivity in oppressed society where other outlets are lacking.”
In an opinion article on The Guardian, Steve Taylor claims and rather effectively argues that humans keep fighting wars because “warfare provides people with a semblance of psychological positivity in oppressed society where other outlets are lacking.” By this he means that, since they economically do not have the privilege to do so, countries that live in poverty and under oppression cannot satisfy their impulses to engage in an activity that gives them a national sense of “cohesion and honor” without said activity being war. Steve Taylor’s ideas are very controversial, which must be kept in mind when assessing his arguments, for it may generate an automatic bias in the reader to disagree with him. Nonetheless, it also must be kept in mind that there is a reason it is not the mainstream way of thinking, so it must be taken with a grain of salt.
In order to make
his final assertion, Taylor’s argument can basically be boiled down to having
applied the following syllogism: “Wars bring people in a fighting country a
sense of community cohesion, a desire to act honorably, and a sense of purpose;
countries seek the “moral equivalent of war” in activities such as sports order
to get the same effects, but with less destruction; oppressed countries, “where
life is hard,” cannot afford to do the same; therefore, they obtain these
positive feelings by engaging in war.” Logically, his mental process makes
sense, however, the premises are not completely valid. Taylor’s first premise
is largely based on claims made by an American psychologist named William
James, offering triangulation. However, William James made these claims in
1910, and truth is of provisional nature, meaning his claims might have been
taken as truth when they were written, but now, especially since many major
military conflicts have happened since 1910, they may no longer bear the same
veracity. Additionally, James and Taylor only explore illustrations of this
claim in developed nations, and Taylor does not, through examples in his text,
confirm that it is true of poverty-stricken nations as well; he makes a hasty
generalization. This is especially true because rich countries have the
financial safety net that will provide the best equipment for them at the
frontlines, which generates a sense of security which might be what results in
the collective happiness: a guaranteed victory or at least a substantial chance
against the enemy. Less economically powerful countries might not have that
same privilege. The second premise connotes that war and channeling positive
community emotions through sports or other forms of entertainment are mutually
exclusive, which isn’t necessarily true. However, the premise is coherent, as
by previous knowledge and paradigms we feel anything that will bring the
“positive consequences of war” causing less negative ones, is more desirable
than conflict.
The most
interesting problems in Taylor’s logic, however, can be seen in the third
premise. At first glance, it makes perfect sense; it is coherent. However,
contextually, it does not follow logical thinking. Wars are more expensive than
running a local theatre, financially supporting community sports teams, and
many other forms of local entertainment. However, when this argument is
processed, our paradigms dictate that spending money on entertainment is
frivolous in a nation where there is a large portion of people not getting
their basic needs met. Yet, war will mean a much larger amount of money being
spent with much more negative outcomes. Nonetheless, our paradigms still make
us see entertainment as superficial and war as damage rather than possible bad
direction of funds. On the other hand, war might be a means of attaining more
basic needs of a population such as land for shelter, so in some cases this
argument may be valid. As always, absolute truths cannot easily be established
(if at all) so many claims will be only true in certain circumstances.
These premises
lead us then, into his conclusion. If the validity of the premises cannot be
confirmed, as explored above, the conclusion cannot be deemed to be valid, at
least not as a progression of the selected premises. Essentially, this makes
the logical process and argument structure Taylor’s article somewhat faulty and
consequentially weak. But of course, it isn’t the only way of seeing and
analyzing it, there could be other, potentially better approaches. For example,
if one could accurately measure the emotional state of all citizens of a
country at war and then do the same to a similar country where funds, less than
spent on said war, have been directed toward providing local entertainment and
“moral equivalents to war” the true effect of these two variables on national “positivity”
could be established. This in turn would create a much more ideal way of
dissecting Taylor’s claim.
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I think your article is very well written and you unpacked the claim in a way that is clear and makes sense. As I read I could definitely agree with your idea that Steve Taylor's claim can be dissected into a simple syllogism. I think the way you look at each premise and how they are valid individually helps assess the validity of the overall claim. I was wondering, though, if you considered a different way to approach the article. I think your analysis is somewhat impersonal and I was curious about what your reaction was when you read the article. How did you feel about it? What did you think? Did you agree with it? Maybe think about how things about yourself, your personality, your culture, your ideas, would have affected your response to this claim? Would someone from a different culture have a different response?
ReplyDeleteTalking about culture, I feel like you could not only consider your point of view but the point of view of other people from different cultures. Although truth is provisional as you mentioned (awesome point by the way), not every country has the same culture about war, the same opinion. If we look into the area of knowledge that is history: historical background and culture may have shaped a nation or group of people's opinion. I want to focus on a particular culture which is the Middle Ages. From my general knowledge, fighting was something that brought glory and was looked at as a noble thing, while today wars are destruction, damage, horror, sadness. Maybe look at how that could have influenced people's opinion on war and consider other things such as the 3's or truth checks.