Dissecting An Article
“Lets States Decide on Marijuana”
The article chosen deals with a highly controversial and much-talked-about topic which has become increasingly important and recurrent in today’s society. The legalisation of marijuana. More importantly, the writer of this article expresses his point of view from a different perspective and delves deeper into the topic. He claims that the legalisation of marijuana should no be handled by the federal government, but yes through each individual state.
Right off the bat, he gives the reader a historical perspective on the topic on why he thinks marijuana should be handled individually by states. To do so, he talks about Nixon’s passing of the Controlled Substance Act and that at the time, marijuana was passed as highly dangerous drug placed right next to other “Section I” drugs such as LSD and heroin, further claiming that such thing has become “a laughingstock, one that states are openly flouting.” This choice of words by the author give his point of view on the legalisation of marijuana validity. The author makes various claims on how the substance is decriminalised, used for medical purposes, and scientifically is less harmful as things such as alcohol-which is nationally legalised. The author uses statistics in order to address the state of marijuana and its legalisation in the United States.
The claim that he makes that states should handle marijuana individually has coherence and logic to it, but it is important to mention that this point of view may be generate because of a political bias the author might or might not have towards how the United States political system is structured. Furthermore, he claims that that the legalisation of marijuana should not be imposed on the states by the federal government like such things as abortion and same-sex marriage. Instead, he argues it should be solely decided by the states in accordance to its values and culture. In regards to his initial claim, this makes his statement valid, for the different states in which some are predominately democrats and others republicans indirectly dictates (democrats are in general more liberal while republicans are more conservative), in a general form how the public sees the legalisation of the substance. That fact that the author makes use of such knowledge, claiming that different states do indeed have different traditions-which they do-makes his initial claim completely valid, for the federal government does not in itself represent the whole nations traditions and values.
The claim, at last, is pretty accurate for the points the author makes are highly coherent with what we know about the substance and how we should deal with it now-a-days. When he says that the more liberal states like Colorado and Washington legalised marijuana for recreational use, it becomes evident to the reader that his other claims are in accordance with his argument as a whole. Throughout the end of the article, the author claims, using real life facts, that the future may be promising for the topic. In congress, a vote of 219 to 189 prohibits the Drug Enforcement Administration form persecuting people who use medical marijuana. In whole, the claim this author makes has a large amount of certainty to it, for his presentation of statistics, real-life facts, and scientific knowledge in defence of the substance make his whole argument valid.
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The article you chose is very interesting since it is on a highly controversial matter. Various different points of view have been published on this topic. I like how you analyze how he came up with his points, using what type of evidence (statistics, facts, science, etc...). However, I think you should make your claim clearer. I'm not really sure what was your knowledge claim. I think you should also further analyze the validity of his claims by using truth checks. I really like this topic and think that there is much discussion with it, so it is a really good topic to discuss in ToK classes.
ReplyDeleteWhen you state the claim is logic however the author might be biased shows the reader that you understand both sides of the article and see beyond what he wrote about. I feel like you could've addressed how coherence, correspondence, and pragmatic checks might've helped further analyze the article and the claim the author has made. This article relates to a TED Talk we watched last year in Berg's class and I think it's worth your time taking a look at it. Furthermore I would suggest you look into fallacies that we learned last year because this has to do with the slippery slope fallacy and how the United States is not allowing marijuana as a whole because of for example this slippery slope effect that they believe might occur. It's clear that you addressed the 3s's in your text about how you personally feel that he could be biased, that the source is American and therefore might not be considering other points of view, and the statement that the author makes as a whole. Your conclusion makes sense however I think there are still some contradicting points to the author's claim that you could look into.
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